Saturday, May 8, 2010

Every Relation Has An End ( Diz headin doesnt suite diz post :D)

I am writing this true story since my friend forced me to do so...she told me not to reveal her identity.. I dnt know why she said so..!!! She is with me now..!! She is seein what i am typing.. So i can tell only the truth..!!!! Believe me........ Its true... U know na I wnt lie :D
lets take a look on our training in one of the top most software company..!!! well... we dont have a tutor now.... we can see some messaging in class..... chatting....!! I was talking with 1 tamil girl..!!!! She was telling her school stories....... suddenly she received an sms....... her eyes was filled with tears........ i asked her the reason....... but she didnt tell it... Then I didnt force her....!! Why should we interfere in her personal matters...[ see i have become a good girl].. ya........ she continued her talk...!
Story of 2 friends...!!!! sorry.. not college friends..!! school friends..!! :D..... I dnt knw how she met him...!! The only thing that i know is they were friends from 7th standard..........!! From same place...bench mates.... they used 2 go to school together..! Their friendship started growing................. without any misunderstanding....... without stupid fights..... Time passed.... 9th standard...... As usual stories.. she was the topper and he the second topper.... once she was having 2 marks more than him... she reduced 3 marks to make him the topper... he came to know this from some teacher and he too reduced his mark..!!!! Well.. I liked it... both of them value their friendship and is ready to do anything for it... Far better than some people who used to keep a relation for their need only!!!!!! [ I dnt have personal experience.. someone told like that... I didnt lie ] There are so many silly silly incidents..... some of you will laugh if you hear it.... some may cry..!! [ Did u laugh by reading the "mark" story.., if so you dont value friendship... ;) ]they had a school tour..........After returning She went to her native place for a small vacation........ In class when she talked with him, he didnt respond.... She thought he may be busy.... but daily it continued... She asked him the reason, he didnt tell anything............ :( Atlast he told................. "If you TALK with me, i feel so bad..." Her eyes were filled with tears.. He said dnt cry in front of me.... Get Lost[ She told me, he didnt tel get lost... but let it be here].... :( :( :(
Ya.. he stopped talking with her......... When something ends , then only we notice how beautiful the beginning was......he ended everything without tellin the reason.... The pain would have been less.. if he had told atleast the reason............
She bought new cycle... Her friend teased her saying that its not good.... he was also standing there....When she left.. he scolded her friend for teasing her... [hey... he stil values the relation.... Then y he is avoiding her...!]
they were in same class for 12th also.. But he didnt talk with her...... Both of them selected engineering... But in different colleges............ Once she got his number from her friend... She didnt save it... She kept the num in her mind.......!!!!! She got a blank message from that number after 7 years............
Now i understood y she cried during our training... It was because of this message........................................
Now also she cherish the good memories with him... Her best friend............ remembers him in her prayers...... Her last wish is to talk with him atleast for a minute............ We had so many friends during school days... Do you remember any of their name...???? sweet memories...???? may be not....... I dnt have words to express how much she value him.....
She promised me, she will bring some his rough notes [7th standard] tomorrow...... even the chits that he wrote......! [ I dont know why she is keeping all that with her..........]When i asked her, she smiled.............[ There are something in this world that we can explain by a sweet smile.....]It is one of the best story that i heard in my training period...........I asked her to review this..... I could see the pain in her eyes............


9 comments:

Kannan Gopalakrishnan said...

Have not maintained the level of standard....of....previous postings.....but...it s really...different....!! story narration can be little bit more improved... so that..the characters...vil be automatically get framed in the mind of readers while reading it..!!
This one seemed to be..the writer is running to somewhere, while writing...(may be due to some external trigger).
Then abt heading "Every Relation Has An End"..(relation ended ya not ended?????).. mystery s still there.
The whole casting s beautiful.
Anyway, This one too pretty good...!!
Keep doin such postings..!!!

subina said...

@kannan:U are judging the way f story telling yaar..!Instead u look into wat she meant by this...
Try to understd...
The value of their relation..the
tears of the girl..the memories she kept so fresh of her school days till now..!even the small chits...!!
Ask a 'why..?' in tat!!!
good story dear..!
i wont call this a stry...!
but good dear..

Kannan Gopalakrishnan said...

@ SU,
Di, If i hvnt understood the inner meaning of the story...then for what purpose I specified abt the heading in the end of my comment.....!!!
Dont u seen tat...???
eehhh??
take a look at tat...and read the Whole story again...dear......

Bibin Bastian said...

Really good one...Keep going

chocks said...

hmm..hope i know the gal who she mentioned in blog post...and now i know why that gal in my batch gets absconded when she get a call :P

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viji said...

Schooldays are really fantastic right!!!
I hope the boy will soon understand her and her friendship...
Lets hope for the best

Jestin Joy said...

seems very unreal. Especially the the "marks" story. I couldn't control my laugh reading that ;). But you have good writing skill.

chocks said...

Oh viji u want that boy to understand her friendship ahh...sure sure...nee sollita kandipa he will understand vera vali enna :P